12.20.2010

'Twas the week before Christmas



"'Twas the week before Christmas
and all across town
everyone was shopping,
not a parking place to be found.

A son with pneumonia,
prescription called in.
To Costco I headed
with feelings of chagrin.

Lines there are normal,
but who could have guessed
the week before Christmas
it'd be such a mess.

I parked in the boonies
and walked half a mile.
All those Christmas shoppers
crowded every aisle.

What have we done
to make such a fuss?
Is this really about Jesus
or is it more about us?

"It's all about giving,"
we say to the kids.
Then we ask them to make us
a Christmas wish list.

I couldn't help but wonder,
walking back to the car.
Is this what Jesus intended
when He was born in a barn?"

- Marcia Reavely

[I'm trying to convince her to start a blog...]

3 comments:

  1. Wow. That is wonderful. That fifth verse really hit me.
    I think she should start a blog! Or at least keep writing poems to be posted here. Thanks for sharing.

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  2. This is really good! Yes, you should start a blog Mrs. Reavely! :)

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  3. mmm. i saw this on fb. very good. i really appreciated reading it. challenging.

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